SHORT SCRIPT - 1st Draft!

A day late, but a first draft script just the same... BEHOLD! (that's a very literary sounding word, don't you think?) You might need to right-click, "save target as..." to download this, I dunno.

http://www.kingofcheese.com/ShortScript.doc

I worked in as many suggested gags as I could, trying to weave a structure through them. The same beginning and ending are there as before but to flow one into the other it took a lot of new stuff as well. I tried to go from gag to gag with function in mind as well as humour.

We will edit and re-edit starting now. Please put your thoughts in the comments section, unless you feel compelled to make a post. Critique and recreate at will! Your input will only serve to make this script funnier n funnier... that is if it's even funny to begin with. I dunno! I've been awake so long, lots of things are funny to me right now. For instance, pillows: HI-LA-RI-OUS!

P.S. When it comes to intellectual property, posting an unpublished script on the world wide web like this could be considered an open invitation to steal it. That's IF you consider this or any unfinalized script worth stealing. Any thoughts? We can always start a 'private docs' mailing-list?